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A                          Gbm
empty trees with empty branches
A                          Gb11
lonely horses on lonely ranches
A                            Gbm
why do they run in circles, love?
A                         C#m
lives like that reminiscent of --

B                                  Gbsus2
sweaters stained with false regret
     A                              Gbm7
the tears of those with oxygen debt
B             B                           A               A
they can't breathe, so they choose to sleep
B               A                  Gbsus4    Gbm
they can't breathe, they're in too deep

B           B      Gbm       Gbm7
you and i are made of stars
       B    B                Gbm     Gbm9
we lie above where dragons fly
A       C#m     B        Gb11   D       C#      Gbm               E                        
if it's dark i know it's space, if it's light i know it's your face
B           B     Gbmsus2 Gbm
you and i are made of stars --
A          Bm       Gbsus4     E
kiss my face and find out why

C#                                 Gbm7
purple peonies line the graves of animals
                   Bm                                Gbsus2
daisies, not yellow but stained and minimal
      D          D                                E              E
it really is something, when we throw it all away
     D          E                           Gb11         Gbm
it really is something, how we all fade to gray

B           B       Gbm     Gbm7
you and i are made of stars
     B      B                 Gbm      Gbm9
we lie above where dragons fly
A       C#m   Gb11       B      C#      D       Gbm                E                        
if it's dark i know it's space, if it's light i know it's your face
B           B     Gbmsus2  Gbm
you and i are made of stars --
A         Bm        Gbsus4       E
kiss my face and find out why

        C#m      E
and i fall too far
          C#m                   E           A
and we chase those speeding cars
            C#m   E
and you hide away

    Gbm7/F#7/Gbsus4/E
and us -- us -- us is all
Lyrics for Ingathol. Are my rhymes good? I hate lyrical stuff, normally...branching out I guess. I'd like to sing this someday, like an indie folk-shoegaze kind of project.

EDIT ________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT? ANOTHER DD? FLIMFLAMMITY WHAT THE PHANTOM MENACE okay. Whew. Overwhelming. Thank you everyone for the support. :)

EDIT 2
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I've rearranged the lyrics so they are singable, and added the chords I think should be played. I believe it is in G flat minor. :)
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Daily Deviation

Given 2014-05-10
Intensely lyrical: Sumus de stellis is by tirasunil. ( Suggested by gummyrabbit and Featured by neurotype )
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AeronDust Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014
I was playing this on my guitar the other day and I just wanted to say
Lyrics are lovely
and the chords work very well with it.
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:icontirasunil:
tirasunil Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Student Writer
I'm so sorry for the late reply, I've been out of the country...thank you! :D Any chance I can hear your version? :) Do you sing?
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LgGibbo Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Perfect! :D
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:icontirasunil:
tirasunil Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Student Writer
Awesome thanks! :D
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:icondragonschest:
DragonsChest Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Professional Writer
Wonderful to read... 
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:icontirasunil:
tirasunil Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Student Writer
Thanks. :)
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:icondragonschest:
DragonsChest Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Professional Writer
You-are-Welcome by KmyGraphic
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:iconpicaroinfinity:
picaroinfinity Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Whoa! Beautiful! I can't write lyrics myself without sounding fake and vague, and so criticism from me would be hypocrisy. I like the ending, and though I cannot put a tune on it, the first first stanza is not really convergent on the topic. The rest of it is very nice.
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:icontirasunil:
tirasunil Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you. :)
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:icontahirakitty:
TahiraKitty Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Student Digital Artist
wow!!! the lyrics are beautiful! you've done a great job!!! Well deserved DD!!!
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:icontirasunil:
tirasunil Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you. :)
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:iconcylexxx:
CyLexxx Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'd suggest the key of D minor. The saddest of all keys.
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:icontirasunil:
tirasunil Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Student Writer
Ooh I'll think about that. :)
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:iconthegalleryofeve:
TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconlainloveplz::iconflyingheartsplz: :clap::clap::clap:
I’m very happy for you!!! :iconloveloveplz: :tighthug:
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:icontirasunil:
tirasunil Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Student Writer
Thanks! :)
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconflyingheartsplz::iconsweethugplz::iconflyingheartsplz:
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:iconlollirotcat:
lollirotcat Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Student Writer
I thought it sounded like lyrics before I noticed the category and your description. I really like the images and the overall feeling of this :D
Congrats on the DD!
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:icontirasunil:
tirasunil Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you! :)
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:iconthe-cosmic-trumpeter:
The-Cosmic-Trumpeter Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow, what gorgeous writing! Awesome work, and congrats on the Daily Deviation :iconclapplz:
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:icontirasunil:
tirasunil Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you. :)
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:iconanticodac:
anticodac Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Absolutely fantastic. I love the feel you give out in this poem. The rhymes are great. Well done. 
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:icontirasunil:
tirasunil Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you very much. :)
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:iconschriftsteller:
schriftsteller Featured By Owner May 10, 2014   Writer
This is wonderful. I normally don't like lyrical things either but there's something about this that pulled me in. The repetition of sounds got me, I think. And the idea in itself is fantastic and beautiful. Congrats on your DD!
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:icontirasunil:
tirasunil Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you so much! :D
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:iconschriftsteller:
schriftsteller Featured By Owner May 12, 2014   Writer
You're quite welcome!
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:iconbrokengod--veins:
brokengod--veins Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I kind of sang this while reading. I love it! :love:
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:icontirasunil:
tirasunil Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Student Writer
Hehe thanks! :)
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:iconwootzie14:
Wootzie14 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I loved it! kaomoji set 1 9/19 it definitely has a unique difference about it kaomoji set 1 3/19 
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:icontirasunil:
tirasunil Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Student Writer
Thanks! :)
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:iconvespera:
vespera Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I hate lyrical stuff normally, too, at least around dA, but this is wonderful
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:icontirasunil:
tirasunil Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you very much, it means a lot. :)
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:iconvespera:
vespera Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Very welcome :)
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:iconingathol:
Ingathol Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
its rather good, I like it :)
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:icontirasunil:
tirasunil Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Student Writer
Why thank you! :)
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:iconhippynothipster:
HippyNotHipster Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Student Writer
I like it
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:icontirasunil:
tirasunil Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Student Writer
Thanks. :)
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Undomiel321 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it! 

Wasn't too sure about it at first, but I found myself reading it a few times over. Something about it asks for a second look. 

Well done!
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:icontirasunil:
tirasunil Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Student Writer
Haha I'm still not sure about it...thank you. :)
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